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When the moon shines, I'll think of those past summers with you...Family
2007-08-02
I love my family and I wouldn't give anything to trade them, but sometimes...I get really close to doing so. I was writing this morning and in the back ground all I hear is...*WOOSH! and BANG! and CLASH!* from my younger brothers. They are adorible and definitally use it to their advantage, but when you are trying to write a best seller....*I can hope can't I* those sounds do not help the creative juices. Infact with all the noise I could only write a few sentances but on the bright side, I wrote the beginning of 2 new books. Here they are I know it's not alot, but feedback on the beginnings is always the best, because a book without a good beginning is nothing.
Il Diavolo Mascherato (The Masked Devil)
The streets of Venice, so bright and lively during the day when the sun beats down on men's brows; change so abruptly when the sun sets in the far west. The streets that seemed to dance around so jubilantly just moments before suddenly turn dark and dreary like a young soul growing older by the second. The people scatter from their daily ventures and hide away in their hovels in fear of "Il Diavolo Mascherato" or "The Masked Devil." With his bright red eyes glaring through his demon shaped mask, he could easily be misperceived as the Devil himself.
*copyright: RGK (8-2-2007)
Twisted Reality
It was a dark, cold, ominous. That's all I can remember about it, that kind of darkness that seems unimaginable and that cold you feel when death seems to creep upon you. Death, it's such an amazing thing, isn't it? Well, maybe not but as J. M. Barrie put it "Death will be a great adventure."
*copyright: RGK (8-2-2007)
Feedback will be much appreciated! Thanks!!
Hardcore_Pyro (2007-08-02)
It sounds like a great start to a great novel....keep us posted.
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